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A New Cross Road 
 
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A New Cross Road

I absolutely loves surprises, so Zach took that in to consideration when carefully planning his proposal. I spent my summer following in Zach's footsteps as Head Girls' Cabin Staff at Glen Lake Camp, the place where we met two years before. Halfway through the summer, there was a 1/2 week off and Zach fully utilized this to pop the question. The Friday before I was supposed to have off I received a call from my boss asking that I report back to the camp a day early, which happened to be our two year anniversary. I immediately called Zach upset (finally having decided to celebrate an anniversary) knowing that our plans would have to be cancelled. Zach agreed to call the camp and ask what it was about and if anything could be done. (He never called.) Zach told me that they could simply celebrate things earlier in the day and I could go back to work and not to worry. When I arrived at the camp, I had to search for her boss who proceeded to tell her she needed to have a meeting and do a mid-summer review of things with the other people on the leadership team. Part way through the impromptu meeting, the boss announced he forgot to clean up the cross on the cliff (which is one of my favorite spots) and only had 30 minutes to do it until the next group would be using the site. He asked for help, and so exactly as Zach expected, I volunteered. We arrived at the top of the hill when I realized we had forgotten trash bags, however, I thought we could do it without them. I was to start at the cross and my boss at the road and we would meet in the middle. Not a minute into it, I had bottles and trash in her hands when Zach appeared from the woods. Thinking I was seeing things, I took the long way to reach the spot Zach stood as he kneeled and asked her to marry him. I quickly agreed and we proceeded to walk through the camp and finally, celebrate with Dairy Queen since Zach had been too nervous to eat prior to the proposal.
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It's ok.. not that great
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This is a really weird story and I don't think it is romantic at all.
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o YES THIS IS the BEST
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OOOOOOOOOOO YES THIS IS THE MOST EXCITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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how sweet!
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Love, Love, Love!
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great!!
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SUPER PRECIOUS
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The most exciting!
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not the most exciting
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woooohooooooooooo
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Sounds like he put a lot of work and thought into this, congratulations!
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Give her a break if she is so excited her words don't come out clearly
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cool dude
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not one of the best
5.0
great story! sweet couple!
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I love LOVE
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Yippy!!
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It's ok
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not very romantic
5.0
Sounds Fun!!!
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summer love
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I hope this couple wins...in every way!
5.0
Oh the young love is ever so sweet.
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That's the best engagement story I've ever heard! Awesome!
5.0
sounds like something in a movie
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they are meant to be
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perfect love story :)
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The best news ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Out of this world
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Superstar Zach!!
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way cool
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a shooting star
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o my gosh!!
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Jackpot!
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GO Zach!
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A mighty fine story!
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Romantic, romantic!!
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Zach is a knight in shining armour!!
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HOT DOG!!
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Terrific
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INCREDIBLE!!!!!
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Very true........and how sweet!
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love this
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Good
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I love this love story:)
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perfect!:)
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this gets the best rate!
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what a guy
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this made me cry
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better than ice cream
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Does it get any better
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planned to a T
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This makes me smile
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loved reading this!
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I need a kleenex
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Needs to win, great story
5.0
Lovely!!!!!
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Love for sure
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Perfect
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what a great story
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Sweet, sweet, sweet!
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True love
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Super duper!!!!!!!!!!
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This makes me hip, hop!!
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Is this from Hollywood...love it
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Beautiful!!!
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A romantic guy!!
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SUPER NICE STORY
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this makes me happy!!!
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great thinking!
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This tops them all!!
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This is better than chocolate
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perfdect story continue the path
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i sooooooooooooooooo love this story:)
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this is so majical
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Yes the BEST, BEST, BEST story EVER
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This is gold
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so meaningful!
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what alovely engagement
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what a great way to go Zach
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100!!
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super awsome
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Top hats off
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simply the best
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Super Duper!!!!!!!!
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love this story
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an alright story.
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not bad, but i got confused in this story. It would start off saying "I" in a sentence and kept switching to "her". Who was really writing this story.
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super duper!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Great
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okay
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I didnt like the proposal at all, and how many people wrote the story?
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Im confused...is this your story or is it someone elses ..the way it is written sounds like it was copied and pasted from somewhere...doesnt seem geniune to me...but congratulations i guess
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Outstanding!
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very sweet!
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BESSTT ONE EVERR
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perfect 3
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Awww
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Great story!
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best love story I have ever read
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the sky is the limit
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so sweet Zach
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Does this get any better
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The best is yet to come
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break out the champagne
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Love 4 ever
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Better that chocolate
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love is in the air!!
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this is like Romeo and Juliet
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sounds like a good time
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wow party down
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zach is a sweetie pie
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2 peas in a pod
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love them both!!
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precious story
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NICE!!!!!!!
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made my heart flutter
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true love
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Lucky Lady
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what a blessing
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zach u have a gift
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wish this was me
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Ilove this story:)
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#1 story
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the planning was awsome
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cute idea
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Planned so well
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Well thought out
5.0
Love story WOW
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So wonderful
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You cant beat this story!!!!
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What I romantic man
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WOWO ZACH !!
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breath taking
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This is the best love tale I have ever heard!!
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10!
5.0
How wonderful Zach
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Nice love story
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Fantastic
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How SWEET
5.0
A very engaging engagement story!
5.0
what a great story
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ahhhhh.... tears to the eyes!
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So cute!
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Very special surprise :)
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sounds like true love
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beautiful story
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love this story
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This was so cute!
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Perfect Story
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This is a true love story and this couple deserves to win. Best of luck in your future together.
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Awesome!
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Fairy tale come true!!!!!!!!!
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Love it!
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wow
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Wonderful Story!!!!!!!!!!!
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How moving
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Great story
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Happy News
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congratulatios!
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Well planned Zach
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how super special!
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love this
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wonderful and warming
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A lovely surprise
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A LOVE STORY
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Beautiful proposal
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excellent, great story!
5.0
Molly and Zach are a super cute couple!
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great job
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Cheers to a great story
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SOOOOOOOOO loving
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beautiful!
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Happy story
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THE BEST
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a beautiful begining
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We LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this could be a movie
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love the story
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love to the couple
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a romantic man
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I like this
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Fabulous! BTW, my bachelorette party in Vegas over Halloween was the bomb! And the Chippendale's show was HOT!
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sweet
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Fabulous!
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flutter, flutter
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such a loving story
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best
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what a story
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excellent job zach
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love the story
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so romantic
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Zach you are a Prince
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A love story at it's best
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Best story
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Very Good!!!
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i love this!
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a heart warming story!
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what a super guy
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How nice!!
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He did it all...tradition, ingenuity, and most important genuine consideration and caring. A winner!!
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SWEET..
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AWWW!!!
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So cute!
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great story
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zach did a great job
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true love
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so special
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The best
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I love this sory
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sweet love
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love
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a lovely present!!!!!!!!!
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what a sensitive man!
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what a surprise
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How romantic
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This needs to win!
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best love story
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so sweet
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love story
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this warms my heart
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I love this story
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can this get any better!
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Excellent
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love is in the air
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What an adorable story!
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This made me cry
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what a memory
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Great
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How romantic
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The BEST story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cinderalla story!
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Very emotional
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Super!
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What a super guy!
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best ever
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What a wonderful area to ask the person you love to marry them.
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tears in my eyes
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what a lucky guy :)
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what a great story
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LyKe OmG sOooOOo KYUuuTTEeee
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Love, love, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aww this is so sweet. Zach sounds like a swell guy.
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how great!
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What a surprise
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on bended knee in front of the cross -- awesome!
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This is so nice!
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so great that he recognized your love for camp!
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so happy for yall!
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great!
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thats awesome!
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What a love story
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how exciting!
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Lovely story
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Well planned
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YA YA YA!
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Excellent
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me likey!
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WOW what a story!
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What's meant to be will always find a way :)
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Great!
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What a romantic man
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Congratulations to you both
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What a wonderful surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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love story!!
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really sweet proposal!
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what a beautiful place to propose
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This story made me cry.
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Perfect story, so sweet!!!!
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aw so beautiful!
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Thoughtfully planned
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Zach is so romantic
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romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WOW!!!
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Zach did the best
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fairy tale story
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What a great story!!
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Good Job!!!!
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so sweet
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What a blessed time!
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very cute!
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oh wow, precious!
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woo woo woo woo!!! that is great!
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Romantic story!
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what a perfect place to propose!
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pure bliss
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omg how cute!
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me gusta mucho mamasita!
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one persons trash is another persons treasure!
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how perfect, considering your camp history!
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Love this!
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love this story and needs to win!!
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Romantic story!
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Beautiful
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so thoughtful
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beautiful story
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love it
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what an amazing photo and cute story.
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Hooray!
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Amazing!
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I'm impressed...
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Soooo cute!
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love it
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awesome story!
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tricky tricky! nice planning, Zach!
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what a blessing!
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What a great picture!
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Zach did a wonderful job surprising Molly. They deserve a trip to Vegas.
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Great story!
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Awesome engagement story!!
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Amazing!
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needs to win!!
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Perfect story!
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Excellent!
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This story is the best one by far!!!!!
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Such a beautiful story of two people who are truly in love!
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that's amazing!
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Sounds like He knew what he was doing.
 
I absolutely loves surprises, so Zach took that in to consideration when carefully planning his proposal.

I spent my summer following in Zach's footsteps as Head Girls' Cabin Staff at Glen Lake Camp, the place where we met two years before. Halfway through the summer, there was a 1/2 week off and Zach fully utilized this to pop the question. The Friday before I was supposed to have off I received a call from my boss asking that I report back to the camp a day early, which happened to be our two year anniversary. I immediately called Zach upset (finally having decided to celebrate an anniversary) knowing that our plans would have to be cancelled. Zach agreed to call the camp and ask what it was about and if anything could be done. (He never called.) Zach told me that they could simply celebrate things earlier in the day and I could go back to work and not to worry.

When I arrived at the camp, I had to search for her boss who proceeded to tell her she needed to have a meeting and do a mid-summer review of things with the other people on the leadership team. Part way through the impromptu meeting, the boss announced he forgot to clean up the cross on the cliff (which is one of my favorite spots) and only had 30 minutes to do it until the next group would be using the site. He asked for help, and so exactly as Zach expected, I volunteered.

We arrived at the top of the hill when I realized we had forgotten trash bags, however, I thought we could do it without them. I was to start at the cross and my boss at the road and we would meet in the middle. Not a minute into it, I had bottles and trash in her hands when Zach appeared from the woods.

Thinking I was seeing things, I took the long way to reach the spot Zach stood as he kneeled and asked her to marry him. I quickly agreed and we proceeded to walk through the camp and finally, 
celebrate with Dairy Queen since Zach had been too nervous to eat prior to the proposal.